9.18.2011

A Sketch from My Desk

"A little daydream...
Is born at night...
A haunting shadow...
And fury's flight...
A listless landscape...
And a harvest moon...
Lights up the thoughts...
Of the Dragon's gloom."



This picture isn't complete, but I am at a loss of what it yet lacks. 
Please give me your thoughts on this sketch.

And the poem was made up on the spot. 
See now, I do have a writer's corner inside me. ;)

1 comment:

  1. Oh, this is so cool!
    Both the poem and the sketch are so neat.

    I'm not the most creative person (by aaany means), but I agree when you say you think the sketch needs more... When I look at it, I think maybe the tree should be shifted to the left to sit one third of the way into the page, and made taller, reaching more into the moon.

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